Recount

This week I have been learning how to write a recount for writing it's been fun and also hard because you have to remember the gems which are personification, past tense, punctuation, staccato sentences, simile/metaphors,  5ws/orientation, structure, planning and paragraphs. The easy part about this type of writing was writing about my topic because it was a very cool topic I wrote about, My story was about going down the hydro slides at the waves pools in whangarei. The hard part was remembering to use better vocabulary because I had always forgotten to use better vocab in my writing. The thing I will do next time is to use a different verity of punctuation like ?, !, ( ), '. Here are some photo's of my writing.