How are you today? I hope you had a nice christmas :)
You have done a fantastic job retelling Ysura Mardini's story! It can be hard to read or listen to a story and then retell it using different words and sentences, but you've done a really great job of putting it into your own writing, ka pai.
One thing that I would suggest when you have lots of writing, is to separate it into paragraphs or different slides so that it is easier for your readers. Other than that, you've done an awesome job. It's great to see you've attributed your images too!
Kia ora Mahuta,
ReplyDeleteHow are you today? I hope you had a nice christmas :)
You have done a fantastic job retelling Ysura Mardini's story! It can be hard to read or listen to a story and then retell it using different words and sentences, but you've done a really great job of putting it into your own writing, ka pai.
One thing that I would suggest when you have lots of writing, is to separate it into paragraphs or different slides so that it is easier for your readers. Other than that, you've done an awesome job. It's great to see you've attributed your images too!
Keep up the great work,
Tayla