We had to use adjectives so try spot as many as possible and comment how many you found.
Chores
1 getting vacuum out
2 doing it
3 finishing
1. During my holiday my cousin whaea hayley told me to vacuum then I started to cry water fell down my face and onto my t-shirt so then I got the vacuum out it look so hard to vacuum.
2. Well I was vacuuming the vacuum was so loud it scorched into my ear my ear was so big I Even heard those kids outside screaming then I could hear the neighbours dog barking it was a brown dog with 5 little puppies.
3. 30 minutes later done!! not I was still sad but I picked myself up the it was about time I finished I was so exhausted after that.
is this true mahuta?
ReplyDeletegreat mahuta
ReplyDeletekeep it up