You have been very busy with SLJ activities, well done. With this activity, you were to write about someone that you think is strong and tough. I think you chose a very strong character! One thing to note, is that it's important when using information from the internet that you reword into your own sentences. For example if it says "The Hulk is a fictional superhero appearing in publications by the American publisher Marvel Comics" you could reword to say "The Hulk was originally a character in comics by the publisher Marvel Comics and now appears in movies". Do you think you could edit your post slightly to ensure they're in your own words for me? Let me know if you have any questions!
Looking forward to seeing more blog posts from you soon Mahuta :-) Cheers, Georgia
Kia ora Mahuta,
ReplyDeleteYou have been very busy with SLJ activities, well done. With this activity, you were to write about someone that you think is strong and tough. I think you chose a very strong character! One thing to note, is that it's important when using information from the internet that you reword into your own sentences. For example if it says "The Hulk is a fictional superhero appearing in publications by the American publisher Marvel Comics" you could reword to say "The Hulk was originally a character in comics by the publisher Marvel Comics and now appears in movies". Do you think you could edit your post slightly to ensure they're in your own words for me? Let me know if you have any questions!
Looking forward to seeing more blog posts from you soon Mahuta :-)
Cheers, Georgia