I hope you’re enjoying your Wednesday morning, I’ve had a really productive morning as I got up early! It’s quite overcast today in Auckland which is nice since I am inside, how about the beautiful Northland? These are some really interesting facts Mahuta, unfortunately I cannot reward you the points for this task as the activity asks you to create a DLO (Digital learning object for example poster, video). This is your chance to show how creative you can get by adding photos. I have also noticed that you have copied your information from natgeokids.com, while it is difficult to re-word facts we need to make sure that we are writing in our own words. For example ‘An adult male’s roar can be heard up to 8km away’ can be changed to ‘Lion’s roar are so loud, did you know that the Male’s roar can be heard 8km away?’. Do you think you could edit your post slightly to ensure they're in your own words for me? Let me know if you have any questions!
Mōrena Mahuta,
ReplyDeleteI hope you’re enjoying your Wednesday morning, I’ve had a really productive morning as I got up early! It’s quite overcast today in Auckland which is nice since I am inside, how about the beautiful Northland?
These are some really interesting facts Mahuta, unfortunately I cannot reward you the points for this task as the activity asks you to create a DLO (Digital learning object for example poster, video). This is your chance to show how creative you can get by adding photos.
I have also noticed that you have copied your information from natgeokids.com, while it is difficult to re-word facts we need to make sure that we are writing in our own words. For example ‘An adult male’s roar can be heard up to 8km away’ can be changed to ‘Lion’s roar are so loud, did you know that the Male’s roar can be heard 8km away?’.
Do you think you could edit your post slightly to ensure they're in your own words for me? Let me know if you have any questions!
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Georgia E