Hi Mahuta, I liked your report on Johan Rockstrom. You told me a lot about him. You told me a lot of what he does as a career. I found it very interesting. I liked it how you had a picture there so people that didn't know who he was could see what he looks like(That's Me!) Maybe you could tell me what things he designs to help us. Did you know who he was? From Ronan
Kia ora Mahuta this is Zhynaliyah. I really like your blog post about change makers. I really liked how you explained what he did. what was your favourite part of this activity? Maybe next time you could not copy and paste the writing from the activity week, maybe you could put into your own words because that's called plagiarism if you don't. Other than that, that blog post was amazing. Bye blog you later and thank you for commenting on my blog.
Wow, Johan Rockstrom sounds like a very influential man! I'll admit, I hadn't heard of him before, so I'm glad you chose him as your changemaker. I enjoyed learning about him and his work from what you've written :)
You've done a great job at changing the information you found into your own words, ka pai! How did you first hear about Johan?
Awesome to see you've included your image attribution too, Mahuta. All round, great job!
Hi Mahuta,
ReplyDeleteI liked your report on Johan Rockstrom. You told me a lot about him. You told me a lot of what he does as a career. I found it very interesting. I liked it how you had a picture there so people that didn't know who he was could see what he looks like(That's Me!) Maybe you could tell me what things he designs to help us. Did you know who he was?
From Ronan
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Mahuta this is Zhynaliyah. I really like your blog post about change makers. I really liked how you explained what he did. what was your favourite part of this activity? Maybe next time you could not copy and paste the writing from the activity week, maybe you could put into your own words because that's called plagiarism if you don't. Other than that, that blog post was amazing. Bye blog you later and thank you for commenting on my blog.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mahuta,
ReplyDeleteWow, Johan Rockstrom sounds like a very influential man! I'll admit, I hadn't heard of him before, so I'm glad you chose him as your changemaker. I enjoyed learning about him and his work from what you've written :)
You've done a great job at changing the information you found into your own words, ka pai! How did you first hear about Johan?
Awesome to see you've included your image attribution too, Mahuta. All round, great job!
Ngā mihi,
Tayla